Wednesday 16 September 2015

A fun filled conversation

Seven friends meet at a shopping mall, the big bazaar at Bhubaneswar. This was their daily business, after a hectic day at work they all met in the evening. They sit there at the sitting space and have fun.

So here they are….. Pooja, Suchitra (suchi), Vasudha (vasu),  Draco, Jay,  Montu and Krishna (krish).



jay was about finish his work and krish came to jay’s cabin and asked him to see the time.

“ hey jay, what are you doing man, look at the time, its over, lets go.” Krish said it as he was very delighted.

“ oh shit, its about to 5, but m already done yaar.” jay replied.

And soon jay and krish were our of the office. They were so happy as it was Friday evening. The blasting evening for them and their friends, who were waiting for them at the bigbazaar. It was like 30 minutes of distance. They reached there jay asked krish to park the bike and jay went inside to the sitting area. Its area was inside the boundry of the mall but not inside of the mall.

There montu, pooja, and vasu were there, jay wave them from a distance. jay came to them and shake hands with montu their signature shake (First shake hands, then lock hands, then lock fingers, then making a fist jay just did a gentle push on montu’s fist downwards then montu does the same. And then they snap their fingers two times and they take their hand towards the left shoulder and from the back side of his head it comes and punch the heart for two times and make a peace sign with 145° )  and with the girls its a bit different (First shake hands, then lock hands, then lock fingers, then making a fist just make a gentle push on her fist downwards then she does the same and then they pat on each others shoulder) and yes its finished now.

jay had the signature with vasu and pooja. And jay asked them ” where is suchi ? ”

“ she had a bad day at office, will be here in 10 minutes.” pooja replied.

Montu asked jay “ where is the romeo ?”

“parking the bike, he will be here in no time.” jay answered.

“ here comes our kishan kanahiya.” vasu indicate krish.

 “ hey pooja go and get some water na yaar, I am feeling so thirsty.” jay said to pooja.

“ why shud I” she said out of rage. And continued ” you just came by, why don’t you bother bringing a bottle of water from out side.”

“ please go na yaar pooja, I will die of thirst, you want to see your friend die in front of you.” jay said it emotionally. And jay pleaded her. And jay added ” and before I die I wanna say you something, I love you yaar pooja. You are my best friend.”

She smiled and stand up and said “ don’t say anything about dying jay, I will not let you die.” And she took montu with her.

“ hey montu some snacks also yaar.” jay said. “ yup” was his answer. And he gave me a thumbs up.

“ always buttering the girls with emotions and flattering dialogues.” Vasu said with a cunning smile.

“ but it works.” jay replied to her.

“  you are so dramatic yaar, and she is so filmy.” She said. And we all laughed.

“ where the hell is this draco man.” Krish asked.

“Must be on his way.” Vasu replied.

And now suchi came from her office with a frowny face.

“ I just hate my job. One day I will through my resignation letter to my boss’s face. ” suchi said in unpleasant way.

“ aww my darling, come here.” jay stand up and spread his hands to hug her. And she came towards jay and jay hugged her and kissed her forehead. ” you will be fine yaar, don’t worry. ” jay said to her.

“Group hug” jay heard it from suchi’s behind, it was pooja shouting. And vasu stand up and pooja and montu and krish we all had a group hug. They were shouting and laughing. And jay asked a girl to take the group pic of them. “ excuse me maam, would you please take a pic of ours.”

“ ohh sure.” The girl replied with a shyish smile.

And then they all started posing for the pic, jay hold suchi, krish with pooja and montu with vasu.

After the click when the girl was about to return the mobile jay asked her to hold back and asked to take some more pics. “ maam please few more clicks.” and the girl agreed.

“ always traping girls.” Vasu said to jay slowly.

“ its called convincing power” he replied.

“  what the hell.” A voice sounded surprised.  And they all look to the direction of the voice, and it was draco.

“ the shoot’s going on without me ?” he said astonishingly.

“ oh just shut up and join us.” Jay said.

 And draco joined the group and they had some pics. And after the photo session  jay thanked the girl. “ thank you so much maam, have a nice evening.”

“ hey draco what took you so long man ?” montu asked.

“ it just the work yaar and the traffic this time its so terrible.” Draco replied.

“ ah m so tired,  give me some water pooja.” Suchi said it as she was looking so dull and tired. Pooja handed over the bottle to her and said ” Its all urs suchi.”

And suchi opened the bottle and started drinking the chilled water gatak…. gatak…. gatak…. “ easy girl easy ” jay said to suchi. “ we are six people here, save something for us darling.” suchi drank half of the bottle and then jay had it. “ ohh it feels so nice.” Jay said it after some gulp and asked ”Pooja want some ?” and she replied with a “no”. And handed over the bottle to vasu. Vasu and krish drank the water and handed over to jay without his knowledge as he was talking to draco.

“ what yaar draco how’s everything going , wow you looking so cool today.” Jay said to draco.

“ fine yaar, going well, I just wait for the time when it will be 5 and I will be with you guys. With you guys near me it like the old college days.” Draco said remembering the days.

“ yeah draco, those were some days worth remembering.” Said krish.

“ yeah those were the best days of my life.” Pooja added.

“ yeah mine also.” vasu, suchi and montu said together.

“ hey what the….” Jay said. “ how the bottle came to me.” And he threw it on the floor. And as soon as he threw it he realizes that he had done a mistake and he close his eyes. And all the friends said “ ohhhh.” In a low voice and they also know that it’s a big this as suchi here don’t like this at all. she is a clean freak. And suddenly suchi who was sitting near jay hold his ears and twisted it.

“ aaahh aahh aahh leave my ear, I got it… I go it. ” jay screamed.

 “ now go and put it in dustbin.” Suchi ordered.

“ ok ok ” and jay get the bottle and threw it into the dustbin. “Now happy “  jay enquired.

“ yes.”  Suchi responded with a delightful smile and she cares jay’s hair.

“ ohh just leave my hari, you are ruining it.” Jay yelled.

And suchi take her hands off his head, and she looked to pooja and vasu, and they have some eye contact, like they talk through it, they are into ruining jay’s hair style. And the three of them attack jay, and ruined his hairstyle. After a bit protesting jay gave up, as he new they won be stop doing it.

“ ohh no no no.”

But nobody heard that. The girls were enjoying the ruining part. And the boys were also laughing. “ he is gone.”  Mantu said to draco and krish.

“ you guys will never change, I don’t know what pleasure you get by doing this.” Jay said adjusting his hair.

“ its just we love doing it, it’s a habit now.” Pooja said while smiling.

“ hey vasu, can you please pass me the chips packet.” Draco said to vasu.

“ oh yeah, here.” Vasu said giving draco the chips.

“ vasu the popcorn for me yaar.” jay said. And he continued “ hey draco for me also yaar.”

And all of them were talking and eating the snacks. And after everything was over jay mouth was burning as he had taken the spicy snacks with the pepper in it.

“  oh my god, I need water my mouth is burning. Pooja please yaar.” Jay pleaded to pooja to bring the water from outside.

And pooja within a sec stood up and went outside to bring the water for jay. Mantu went with her and they came with two bottles. Mantu threw a bottle to jay and jay drank the water. jay stood up and thanked pooja. ” thanks yaar pooja you are my darling, I love you yaar.” And he hugged her. “ love you too.”And pooja also hugged him.

 “ what ?” mantu said. “  I brought the water, pay the bill, gave it to you and you’re thanking pooja. That’s not fair.”  He said unpleasantly.

“ who told you to go ? I asked pooja for the water.” Jay replied.

“ excuse me, just minutes before you were saying I am your darling to me, and suddenly you changed the side.” suchi said to jay.

“ suchi, you both are my darlings, I love you both.” Jay replied.

“ you’re leaving me jay.” Vasu said.

“ I love you all.” jay said with a smile.

And then krish pointed to a girl. “ hey jay, check out the black one on ur 11 o clock, she is coming right this way.”

And as soon as jay saw that girl her pushed pooja aside. And stand there in front of the group being stud.

“ hey watchout.” Suchi said. “ are you ok pooja ?” suchi inquired. “ yeah suchi. I am.”

“ he does it all the time, a beautiful chic around him and he kicks out his best buddies.” Vasu said to suchi and pooja. And they were sitting with montu and draco and watching krish and jay attacking the girl.

“ hey krish, ready ?” jay asked. “ yup” was the answer from krish.

And just the girl passed jay, jay suddenly responded “ excuse me maam, I believe this is yours.” and he bend down to lift a ten rupee note from the ground.

“oh my god, thank you so much.” The girl responded to him.

“ well my friend here showed me this, so you should be thanking him first.” And he pointed towards krish by giving her the note. “ aww thank you so much. You are so kind. I don’t know how to thank you.” The girl said totally mesmerized by the looks of krish.

“ you already did, but if you really want then lets have a cup of coffee inside.” Krish said looking into her eyes in a very amorous way. The girl without losing a second said “ yes.” And they both went inside.

Jay came back to his folks. smiling. as if he had done a great job there.

“ how did girls fall for that ? asked suchi irritatingly.”

“ well what can I say.” Said jay.

“ its just the talent we have, to attract the ladies, with our communication skills.” said draco.

“ ohh you also draco, don’t. its just not good for you.” Vasu said.

“  well then I have to say here.” Jay said. “ draco is the killer of all, he has the best  natural talent to persuade girls.”

“  and we thought draco is the good guy here.” Suchi said.

And then suddenly krish came out of the entrance of the mall towards them.

“ what happened.”  Montu asked.

“  she is here with her father.” Krish said.

“ holy shit. Really ? ” draco asked.

“ who comes to mall like this with parents.” Jay said.

 And the girls were giggling by seeing the boys reactions. They were enjoying to have the scene. And that very moment montu turned the face of jay towards the entrance again. Jay looked there and his eyes were big opened.

“ have a look at this jay.” Montu said turning his face towards the entrance.

“ oh my god ” jay exclaimed with his eyes wide open. And he stood up slowly.

“ jay don’t ” suchi said. And asked him to sit down. “ just sit down jay.”

“ jay, you must have thought of approaching her in a slow motion like raghav and ask her out, right ?” asked vasu.

“ uh huh”  jay answered. And continued “ for her I can have a bullet here.” He showed his heart. He was ready to take a bullet in his heart for that girl.

“ we know you very well jay,  you are not what you show to others, you are just a simple n calm, you show you like girls, flirting from outside, but from inside you are its opposite, sober person not any bad intension for girls, so protective and helpful. Just like alok.” Pooja said.

“ who the hell is alok ?” jay asked.

“  the one who is writing us down right now.”pooja said.

“ what we are being written now.” Jay asked surprisingly.

“ yup and we are doing everything as he for his wish.“ vasu added.

“ this is some kind of creepy thing going on.” Draco said.

“ who is that guy ?” montu asked.

“ ahh he is our creator montu.” suchi said.

“ creator ?  sounds like he is god to us.” Kirsh said.

“ in a way he is like our god.” vasu said.

“ that’s some crazy shit man.” Jay replied.

“ and what this guy do ?” draco asked.

“ nothing really, but he writes.” Vasu said.

“ ohh now this jobless dude is writing our destiny.” Krish said.

“ hey watch out boys. Don’t drag me between you.” I (alok) said. And the boys were shocked to heard my voice.

“ did you ?” jay said. “ what the hell was that ?” draco asked. And krish and montu were shocked.

“ where did that came from then.” Jay asked.

“ that’s me alok, your creator, enough of me and just do your work.” I (alok)said.

The girls were all laughing, they always enjoy watching the boys freaked out. And the boys back to their position.

“ shit yaar the girl got away.” Jay said displeasingly. and sat near suchi.

“ don’t worry yaar jay, there are many more to come.” Vasu said.

And suchi reacted to that one by giving vasu a what the hell eyes.

“ he don’t need anyone.”  suchi said.

“He needs me suchi.” Pooja said with a cute smile.

“ he needs me too.” Suchi said. And then three of them hugged jay together.

“ you guys look cute together.” Draco said.

“ not you, its us, we all look good together.”pooja said smiling.

“ anyone hungry, I want pizza, what say guys.” Jay asked.

All agreed and ordered their choices. And jay went to the pizza hut which was at the same building. And krish went after him.

“ wait jay, m also coming with you.” Krish said to jay.

“ these two together always have something in their mind. They behave so different while they are together. ” suchi said.

“ and they check out every girl passes them.” Pooja added.

Jay and krish went inside the pizza hut ordered the pizzas, and told the waiter there to take the orders to the sitting space. The boy agreed. And the came back, checking out every girl on their way. And from distance suchi, pooja and vasu looking at them.

“  they will never change.” pooja said.

“ yup. that’s true” vasu replied.

 “ whatever.” Suchi said and take a deep breath.

Jay and krish came to them and told them the order will be deliver within 15 minutes. And they were just into their talking, jay was with pooja and suchi, krish and montu with vasu and draco was busy with his phone. And after sometime a guys came from pizza hut with pizzas and cokes and handed over jay and krish. Krish tooks the pizzas and jay took the cokes.

 And he asked “ anything more sir ”

“ ohh yeah I wanna have you.” Pooja said with a witty smile. And they all looked at pooja with suspicious eyes like what the hell are you doing.

“ pooja control yaar” draco said.

“ yes poojs its so expressive” jay said.

And suddenly he take out his mobile phone and gave it to pooja and said “ pooja you are on.”

pooja understood what jay was trying to say and then she asked the delivery boy to take some pics of them with a innocent smile, the boy had to say yes after seeing a world class smile of pooja.

 Then everyone take out one piece pizzas and pose for the pic.

“ ready” the boy asked.

And then all shouted 'peace' smiling with the pizza in their hand. And the picture clicked.



The convo and scene created by me….. Alok Subash Kujur

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